Showing posts with label Titles. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Titles. Show all posts

The Pitfalls of a Good Title

Monday, February 18, 2019


A good title is a pitfall for the reader, which makes it a windfall for the writer.

I recently finished reading a book of short stories by Irish writer Maeve Binchy. She was a new author to me, but the BookBub description made Chestnut Street sound interesting. And the fact that they were short stories meant I could read them one at a time and squeeze them in between more important matters.

Or so I thought.

Unfortunately, I would finish a story and be immediately intrigued by the title of the next one. I suppose I could have avoided the problem by not turning the page, but that isn’t in my nature. I like to move to the page I will start on next rather than ending with the last one. I’m not sure why, but it seems more hopeful and less stagnant that way. So I saw the title and read on.

To give you some idea of the allure created by Maeve’s short story titles, they include “A Problem of My Own,” “The Cure for Sleeplessness,” “Taxi Men Are Invisible,” “The Lottery of the Birds,” and—my favorite—“The Wrong Caption.”

I always struggle to find the right title for my books, and I fail miserably at times. I sent a book about a riverboat accident to my beta readers with the working title “Tragedy at Dawn,” and one girl said it sounded like a Magic Treehouse book. She was right, and I eventually came up with “Dark Waters,” which is much better. But good titles are hard to find.

They don’t have to be complicated, however. Maeve Binchy’s short story collection is titled simply Chestnut Street. Each short story is about a different character, but they all either live on or have a connection to Chestnut Street in Dublin. I’m assuming it’s a fictional street, but I don’t actually know because I haven’t been there—yet. But the title draws upon the common denominator, so it works for that book.

An interesting title can’t turn a bad book or story into a good one. I continued reading Chestnut Street because Maeve Binchy is a masterful storyteller, not because—or at least not just because—I wanted to see what the titles had to do with the stories. Still, it is the titles that kept me reading when other priorities told me to put the book down and return to it later.

If you are looking for a good read, try Chestnut Street. After all, don’t you want to know what the wrong caption said?

Just make sure you don’t have anything important to do.

What's in a Title?

Monday, November 5, 2012

I'm taking a poll, but it has nothing to do with the election.

Lately I've had several discussions with my writer friends about titles of blog posts. Should the title be descriptive so the reader knows whether the subject will interest him or her, or should the title be intriguing to rouse the reader's curiosity? The same question applies to the blurb included with a Facebook post linking to the blog. I'd love to have your comments telling me what type of title--informative or intriguing--is more likely to make you read a post.

As an illustration, but mostly for fun, ask yourself which of the following book titles shown in the picture attract you most.

  • Little Women or Pride and Prejudice. Both of these novels are about sisters who look for love. Okay, so you have to read partway into Little Women before the love stories start piling up, but they do come.
  • Bird by Bird or On Writing Well. These are both books about writing.
  • A Pebble in My Shoe or Four Continents to Freedom. Each is an autobiography about growing up in Europe during World War II, living in an internment camp, and becoming a refugee after the war.
  • The Last Voyage of the Lusitania or A Night to Remember. While one book is about the Lusitania and the other is about the Titanic, each tells the story of a passenger ship that sank at sea and lost over a thousand lives.
  • The Writer Got Screwed (but didn't have to) or The Law (in Plain English) for Writers. These books are both legal guides for writers.
  • An English Murder or Violet Dawn. Both are murder mysteries.
There are no right or wrong answers. It's all personal preference.

But I would like to know which type of title is more likely to make you read my blog posts.