Slang and even formal vocabulary change over time. As a writer of historical fiction, my challenge is to stay true to the period without confusing my readers with words they define differently.
Some slang is practically timeless. “Okay”
has been around since at least 1840, and “kids,” as in little children, was in
use as long ago as the seventeenth century. Since my characters and my readers have
the same understanding as to the meaning of these words, I don’t have to think
twice about including them in a manuscript.
Other words aren’t as clear. I ask my
middle-grade beta readers whether there are any words they didn’t know and couldn’t
figure out from the context. When I got back the evaluation forms for a novel set
in 1925, one fourth grader included “fast” on that list. At first, I was confused.
Who doesn’t know what that word means? But when I searched the manuscript
looking for it, I came across a scene where my protagonist asks her mother if
she can get her hair bobbed and the mother responds that short hair makes women
look fast. Now I understood the beta reader’s comment, and I found a way to rewrite
the scene using language today’s children are more likely to know.
Then there are the slang words that need
careful handling. Historically the word “gay” meant cheerful or merry, and all
of my characters would have understood it that way. Defined that way, it was in
frequent use during the periods covered by my novels, so avoiding it seems a
little stilted. But because my readers would give it a different meaning, “gay”
doesn’t occur in any of my middle-grade manuscripts.
Then there is the question of when a
particular slang word entered the American vocabulary. Would my character have
used a particular word at the time of the story? Fortunately, about two years ago
I found a used copy of the 3rd edition of the Dictionary of American
Slang by Chapman and Kipfer. If I look up a word, that dictionary may tell
me whether it was in use at the time. If it doesn’t have dates, or if the word
is not included, then I’ll do an Internet search for “[word] origin.” And if I still
can’t figure out when it became popular, I won’t use it.
Writing historical fiction is always a
challenge.
But it’s rewarding to get it right.
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For
more on this subject, you can read my January 25, 2021 and February 1, 2021 blog posts.
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